That was some either well written, or very well improved dialogue, and just had me going the whole time. I like the animation too, didn't hurt it at all even though it wasn't a full flowing animation...sorry can't think of the right word, I'm sure TD could help me out though.
I'm giving it 4 stars because the Concept and Visual to Audio Sync was completely on point. Really nice editing job, I'm guessing you were mostly solo on this project.
I'd give it 5 stars if you had more Character Animation, which I understand is the most difficult part, but also the most powerful thing you can do in an Animation, frame by frame...it drives me crazy sometimes, but I do it because I love it.
Nice work man, I hope to see more from you.
Thank you for your kind Words.
Yes, I was a solo dude making this, and had I had more time to Work on it (I was working on my Zelda video at the same time as this and the deadline for both was in feburary so I was pretty fucked), I would've definitly made the characters move alot more.
That was very honest and in it's own way, moving. You really captured a true and unique American Experience. We live in a country with no culture. Which is both a miricle and tragidy all wrapped up in a Big Mac takeout box....
If it's a true story, that's fantastic. If it's a slightly modified story, still amazing.
Either way, they seem to be trying to help people. More power to them.
I saw the struggle of a girl in a world of one way streets. The bible bashing is fine by me, because I understand that the bible is used for both good and evil depending on the weilder.
I saw an incredible amount of expression through an old style of stop animation coupled with paper cut outs. This needs to win some kind of award, or if possible be featured on TED talk.
Though I truly believe in equality, I also don't mind the bashing of men in this piece. Once again, men are both good and evil depending on the "wielder."
Also, if I understand correctly, I'm sorry for your loss, one way or the other.
It's funny that you said TED talk because I was literally just wathing a TED talk about crime on netflix when I wondered off to read your comment. : ) Yes, every type of person and thing has wronged another type of person or thing. Women were discouraged for thinking for themselves for 1000's of years, so do you really think it was a woman who thought up and enforced"homosexuality is wrong"? The idea of a woman enforcing anything was still a hysterical idea until the 1960's... I'm not directing the question to you, just a question in general. As the artist, I am the only one who knows the true intent of the meaning of the story. The story was meant to bring to light lgbt issues... the idea of it being "anti-man" was never considered until people attached that meaning to it on here... sadly.. people will do what they will. Every time you try to send out a message about something it always get labeled and dismissed as something else lol.. thank you so much for taking the time to watch my video and comment on it - hugs
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